First, my favorite food is chocolate. I like it very much because when I'm bad it makes me happy. And, also it helps me to concentrate studing. why? because sometimes my mother allows eating chocolate when I finish my homework.
Second, my another favorite food is potato. I like it as much as chocolate. The reason that I like is it has the flavor of nut and also it is very soft. I love mashed potato the best.
So I think favorite food has role like Endorphin. because if we think about that it makes people
-mashed potato
-chocolate 
정연 잘지내지..예진맘이야...
답글삭제역시 글쓰는건 쵝오구만....
내가 일빠로 적으니 ㅎㅎㅎㅎㅎㅎ...
갔다와서 예진이랑 한번 진하게 놀수 있게 다음번에도 멋진글 부탁해요...~~~~~
Jeongyeon,
답글삭제Your topic is interesting that's why I wanted to read more description about your favourite food. In developing ideas for an essay, it is impotant to focus on providing relevant details about your topic. I would also like to encourage you to use a diverse range of vocabulary to express your ideas.
Happy new year and I look forward to reading some more of your blog entries.